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  1. Posted: February 24, 2024In: Short Film

    When sent a package containing her boyfriend’s belongings, a conflicted lover must uncover the cause of his disappearance; but when she learns he willingly vanished to pursue space travel, she must embrace selflessness and accept his decision.

    Jeremy Palazzolo Penpusher
    Replied to answer on February 27, 2024 at 3:48 pm

    THANK YOU so much for the feedback. I will definitely take this into consideration. Cheers :)

    THANK YOU so much for the feedback. I will definitely take this into consideration.

    Cheers 🙂

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  2. Posted: June 27, 2022In: Romance

    When an introverted man sees a woman in red in the building across from him, he must stumble on a foolish quest on a dating app to find her, but she isn’t what she seems.

    Jeremy Palazzolo Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 2:07 pm

    Hey Marcelo, Very interesting concept, I think that the logline is a little longwinded and could be refined a little more. Perhaps "in the building across from him" could be cut unless it is entirely crucial to the plot and the wording for "he must stumble on a foolish quest on a dating app to findRead more

    Hey Marcelo,

    Very interesting concept, I think that the logline is a little longwinded and could be refined a little more.

    Perhaps “in the building across from him” could be cut unless it is entirely crucial to the plot and the wording for “he must stumble on a foolish quest on a dating app to find her” could be worded better.

    Cheers.

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