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When amateur thieves break into his retirement home it’s upto an aging war veteran to kick their a**, risking his slip disk
This is probably not very helpful, but this logline makes me chuckle. Sounds like something I?d enjoy watching.
This is probably not very helpful, but this logline makes me chuckle. Sounds like something I?d enjoy watching.
See lessWhen an obsessive archaeologist accidentally releases a near-omnipotent demon, he must impersonate its boisterous, evil overlord to con it back into captivity.
Basically, the kind of situation I?m going for (and this may be yet another script lol) is: Imagine, the most powerful, AI-controlled bomb, set to blow up the planet thinks you?re it?s mommy. It still is set to explode and suggesting otherwise would blow your cover, but you can suggest inconspicuousRead more
Basically, the kind of situation I?m going for (and this may be yet another script lol) is:
Imagine, the most powerful, AI-controlled bomb, set to blow up the planet thinks you?re it?s mommy. It still is set to explode and suggesting otherwise would blow your cover, but you can suggest inconspicuous actions, that include delays, thereby buying your buddies the time to defuse it.
Very basic. There?s more to it, but yeah.
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The elegance of the logline makes me think, you may be cool?writing for a?dual protagonist. Was that intentional?I might, maybe, like?a clearer?distinction between them going out to find a needle in a haystack, or having to locate/ confront a specific person.Also feels like it will step up, once theRead more
The elegance of the logline makes me think, you may be cool?writing for a?dual protagonist. Was that intentional?
I might, maybe, like?a clearer?distinction between them going out to find a needle in a haystack, or having to locate/ confront a specific person.
Also feels like it will step up, once they found the person. Is there another obstacle + action there? Worth loglining?
I’m also, personally,?a sucker for character attributes, but that may make it clunky again.
The economy of words is awesome!
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