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When an unsettling past is brought to light between two enemy veterans, a young lady struggling to find her story in the world must reconcile the gentleman, for friendship and trust is at stake.
Notes: • The phrase 'unsettling past' is too vague and could benefit from elaboration to create intrigue and draw in readers. • The description of 'a young lady struggling to find her story in the world' is also too ambiguous and would benefit from specific details about her struggle, making it moreRead more
Notes:
• The phrase ‘unsettling past’ is too vague and could benefit from elaboration to create intrigue and draw in readers.
• The description of ‘a young lady struggling to find her story in the world’ is also too ambiguous and would benefit from specific details about her struggle, making it more compelling and relatable for readers.
• Adding more information about the stakes at play would increase impact, engagement, and heighten the sense of tension in the story. Specifically, what is at risk if the two veterans cannot reconcile?
Well done on the upload Jake Reeves!
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