1. Posted: January 18, 2017In:

    Requesting critical feedback

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    jlmarevalo Logliner

    I like it. A log line to me does not have to answer everything. It should spark curiosity.

    I like it. A log line to me does not have to answer everything. It should spark curiosity.

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  2. Posted: January 2, 2017In:

    When his older brother is framed for a brutal murder. A 15yr old prodigy with incredible powers & abilities. Will unite with his “retired” criminal genius uncle. To stop a superhuman genius serial killer; who has a vendetta against the city’s elite.

    jlmarevalo Logliner

    I like Craig's fine tuning the logline. How come I can;t post a logline?

    I like Craig’s fine tuning the logline.

    How come I can;t post a logline?

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  3. Posted: February 15, 2016In:

    The Devil’s Cruise – On a family vacation cruise a father lost his daughter thru Somalian pirates and will now choose between saving her daughter or his business.

    jlmarevalo Logliner

    It is also much easier to say you will pick your daughter instead of money only because you are not in that situation...I would like to think I will pick my daughter too but I will never be in that situation because I don't have a daughter and I don't have money...

    It is also much easier to say you will pick your daughter instead of money only because you are not in that situation…I would like to think I will pick my daughter too but I will never be in that situation because I don’t have a daughter and I don’t have money…

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