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A true story, a man jailed twenty-six years for a crime his twin committed fights a choice: exact sweet revenge on his brother or forgive him to be fully and finally free.
Great idea for a compelling story with what can be an interesting journey for the main character, but... A story like this should be a biography, but it is passable as drama. What could you do to make the forgiveness part a little more interesting??It feels like if the protagonist decides toRead more
Great idea for a compelling story with what can be an interesting journey for the main character, but…
- A story like this should be a biography, but it is passable as drama.
- What could you do to make the forgiveness part a little more interesting??It feels like if the protagonist decides to forgive his twin, the movie would end there. There should be more struggle and some surprise involved.
See lessA quirky, slightly neurotic writer must overcome years of social anxiety and isolation in order to win the heart of the man she loves.
"quirky, slightly neurotic writer" ---> Why not put quirky, neurotic writer instead? "Must overcome years of social anxiety and isolation" ---> You should be a little more specific with how the character goes on about achieving the goal, maybe add a little more stakes?
“quirky, slightly neurotic writer” —> Why not put quirky, neurotic writer instead?
“Must overcome years of social anxiety and isolation” —> You should be a little more specific with how the character goes on about achieving the goal, maybe add a little more stakes?
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