1. Posted: April 9, 2020In:

    With the help of his undead lost love, a reluctant store manager must return to the island where she was slain to prevent the escape of a primitive evil before the anniversary of her death.

    Jonathon Nicholas Penpusher

    Hi Odie,   i actually love this premise. its a refreshing and interesting take on the classic horror movie.   for me, these would be my questions to ask:   Why does he love her? What is unique about their relationship? Why is he reluctant? what is it that is making him doubt his decisRead more

    Hi Odie,

     

    i actually love this premise. its a refreshing and interesting take on the classic horror movie.

     

    for me, these would be my questions to ask:

     

    • Why does he love her? What is unique about their relationship?
    • Why is he reluctant? what is it that is making him doubt his decision to go back? that seems like something you could flesh out?
    • Can you make the primitive email somehow connected to their relationships, so what i mean is, its something connected to their past, which is why they’re being haunted?

     

    Overall, i actually really liked it, and would watch that movie.

     

    cheers.

    Jonathon

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