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When an elder crime boss sits down with a younger crime boss, at a poker game, he must carefully find a way to avoid a gang war and keep everyone at the game calm.
I'd replace the word 'elder' with 'older' or possibly 'aging'. Also feel the event could be stronger. A good start though.
I’d replace the word ‘elder’ with ‘older’ or possibly ‘aging’. Also feel the event could be stronger. A good start though.
See lessWhen she arrives at a trading post, her missing husband makes her very popular with the local marshalls
The character, event and action are all very unclear in this logline. Referring to the character ?is vague, a clearer definition of the character is needed. ?Arriving at a trading post? is a weak event and not enough to carry the action of the film. Also, there is no action at all. More specifics neRead more
The character, event and action are all very unclear in this logline. Referring to the character ?is vague, a clearer definition of the character is needed. ?Arriving at a trading post? is a weak event and not enough to carry the action of the film. Also, there is no action at all. More specifics needed.
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