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  1. Posted: April 5, 2018In: Drama

    An up-and-coming, LA-based actor is about to have his “big break” meeting with a star-director when he abruptly gets news from his casual-girlfriend, Rachel, that she’s pregnant, unplanned, which begins a twist-filled night that escalates to an explosive climax between Dae and Rachel.

    JSieff Penpusher
    Added an answer on April 5, 2018 at 10:06 pm

    You don't need names of characters but you should have an adjective to describe their personality - e.g."A confident up-and-coming, LA-based actor is about to have his ?big break? meeting with an eccentric star-director but his neurotic casual-girlfriend reveals that she?s pregnant and is certain heRead more

    You don’t need names of characters but you should have an adjective to describe their personality – e.g.

    “A confident up-and-coming, LA-based actor is about to have his ?big break? meeting with an eccentric star-director but his neurotic casual-girlfriend reveals that she?s pregnant and is certain he’s the father, bringing everything he’s worked for crashing down.”

    It could work better if she appears out-of-the-blue, and could give birth any second.

    Hope this helps.

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