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A father is conflicted by his son asking about the family business, wanting to raise his son to be an honest man, a father must work against his own family to break the cycle of their petty crime.
A little vague. Sounds interesting with just a tad more colour... ie. is it a mob family, an IRA family etc. Also double use of the word family not necessary and 'Familys' definitely incorrect - with every word precious, good to get every one right. Also, why is this the only way to keep the familyRead more
A little vague. Sounds interesting with just a tad more colour… ie. is it a mob family, an IRA family etc. Also double use of the word family not necessary and ‘Familys’ definitely incorrect – with every word precious, good to get every one right. Also, why is this the only way to keep the family together? Is there an inciting incident there? “When a bank robbery goes wrong, a man must work against his own…” etc.
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A little on the vague side - no great hook which would make me want to see, or anything intriguing about the main character hinted at. Plus, grammatically incorrect, a word missing
A little on the vague side – no great hook which would make me want to see, or anything intriguing about the main character hinted at. Plus, grammatically incorrect, a word missing
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