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  1. Posted: March 11, 2020In: Drama

    A military veteran eagerly tries to start the next chapter of his life but runs into Murphy’s Law at pretty much every turn, testing his resiliency.

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    Added an answer on March 12, 2020 at 2:43 am

    Version 2.0: Mostly based on true events, a newly discharged veteran must use his resiliency when faced with challenges involving career hurdles, obstacles at college, and a deceptive roommate.

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    Mostly based on true events, a newly discharged veteran must use his resiliency when faced with challenges involving career hurdles, obstacles at college, and a deceptive roommate.

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  2. Posted: March 11, 2020In: Drama

    A military veteran eagerly tries to start the next chapter of his life but runs into Murphy’s Law at pretty much every turn, testing his resiliency.

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    Added an answer on March 11, 2020 at 3:07 am

    This is my first attempt at a log line, so I wasn't sure how descriptive to be of details.? It's (mostly) based on a true story, similar-ish to "The Pursuit of Happyness".? Thanks for the input!

    This is my first attempt at a log line, so I wasn’t sure how descriptive to be of details.? It’s (mostly) based on a true story, similar-ish to “The Pursuit of Happyness”.? Thanks for the input!

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  3. Posted: February 25, 2020In: Short Film

    A hairstylist?s session with a walk-in becomes much more when she begins to suspect the customer is the woman who abandoned her as a baby.

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    Added an answer on March 11, 2020 at 3:04 am

    If the current client is a walk-in, perhaps explain why that's significant to the story.? Is the salon appointment-only and the client begged for an exception due to some "hair emergency"?? ?I would also suggest giving an example or two explaining the background behind her suspicions; whether it's kRead more

    If the current client is a walk-in, perhaps explain why that’s significant to the story.? Is the salon appointment-only and the client begged for an exception due to some “hair emergency”?? ?I would also suggest giving an example or two explaining the background behind her suspicions; whether it’s knowing things only her mother would or something more alarming.? I’d be interested learning more.

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