1. Posted: August 17, 2020In:

    When a self proclaimed DJ chases after power and notoriety, with the help of her best friend and mentor, she must try to keep her thrown in tact from the enviousness of another DJ even if that means going beyond her moral beliefs.

    KeynoJones Logliner

    Thanks, you are right!!! That be the HARDEST is keeping it short but descriptive with the challenge involved the character has to face. Something I'll definitely take in consideration, thank you.

    Thanks, you are right!!! That be the HARDEST is keeping it short but descriptive with the challenge involved the character has to face. Something I’ll definitely take in consideration, thank you.

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  2. Posted: August 17, 2020In:

    When a self proclaimed DJ chases after power and notoriety, with the help of her best friend and mentor, she must try to keep her thrown in tact from the enviousness of another DJ even if that means going beyond her moral beliefs.

    KeynoJones Logliner

    I honestly used a poor word choice on that matter, I should have put something like a "confident but arrogant DJ" a better adjective would had suffice since self proclaimed is referencing self, so you're right!! And thrown in tact I meant mainly her shining moment in place from being overthrown agaiRead more

    I honestly used a poor word choice on that matter, I should have put something like a “confident but arrogant DJ” a better adjective would had suffice since self proclaimed is referencing self, so you’re right!! And thrown in tact I meant mainly her shining moment in place from being overthrown again, probably bad word choice haha, thanks for the critique and review mate.

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  3. Posted: January 23, 2020In:

    A daughter and a father sits at a table. From chewing with her mouth open, to bad table manners to taking drugs right in front of him, the father does not realise anything because he is distracted by his phone.

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    KeynoJones Logliner

    Not really a logline, more like an explanation, which is two totally different things. You first of all need to give a description of the father, to me he seem like a careless kind of guy if he doesn't see his child is taking drugs in front of him like how he doesn't realize it if she taking them inRead more

    Not really a logline, more like an explanation, which is two totally different things. You first of all need to give a description of the father, to me he seem like a careless kind of guy if he doesn’t see his child is taking drugs in front of him like how he doesn’t realize it if she taking them in front of him, I don’t understand that bit.

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