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  1. Posted: May 10, 2021In: Fantasy

    A reckless fourteen-year-old aeronaut plans on breaking out his orphan keeper from a foreign prison using a magic hot air balloon.

    Kishimoto.Pi Penpusher
    Replied to answer on May 10, 2021 at 9:20 am

    First off, I just want to say thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate you taking the time to give your opinion and suggestions! Second, to clarify "his orphan keeper" and the relationship he has with her, Her name is Jessie and she ran an orphanage where she met Roland the fourteen-yeRead more

    First off, I just want to say thank you so much for your review. I really appreciate you taking the time to give your opinion and suggestions!

    Second, to clarify “his orphan keeper” and the relationship he has with her, Her name is Jessie and she ran an orphanage where she met Roland the fourteen-year-old. The two grew a strong bond and Jessie became like an older sister to Roland.

    I just don’t know how I would go about wording that relationship in a logline.
    Again, thank you for your review and your suggestion is very helpful.

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