1. Posted: March 4, 2016In:

    The hunt for a spy takes a twist when an innocent bystander in a public park is mistaken for a government agent. (short film)

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    Agreeing with the previous reviews, my first question was who is the main character. I'm a fan of spy movies in general, so good luck!

    Agreeing with the previous reviews, my first question was who is the main character.

    I’m a fan of spy movies in general, so good luck!

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  2. Posted: February 27, 2016In:

    When a self-doubting boxer is offered a shot at the heavyweight title of the world, he must fight the fear inside to win the battle in the ring. (Rocky)

    kjennar Logliner

    Great feedback dpg and nir shelter.? Plenty of helpful insights for me to think about.

    Great feedback dpg and nir shelter.? Plenty of helpful insights for me to think about.

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  3. Posted: February 2, 2016In:

    A drunk, homeless, hopeless man wanders around the streets of Los Angeles, California. One day, he catches a beautiful homeless woman buying food for her son with the only $5 she receives from a little boy. The homeless man is inspired by this act and starts building a hot chocolate station with the few dollars he obtains in one day to people in the cold. He sells hundreds of hot chocolates until Summer comes. The man must make lemonade but there are no lemons in Los Angeles. He can’t afford a plane and doesn’t have a car.

    kjennar Logliner

    Interesting concept, but as a logline, I found this way too long and hard to follow.

    Interesting concept, but as a logline, I found this way too long and hard to follow.

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