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  1. Posted: August 13, 2020In: SciFi

    After a raid by a corrupt government leaves his partner dead, a desperate man uses gang controlled technology to escape his dystopian world to an alternate reality in a bid to replace a version of himself living an idealistic life.

    Knightrider1984 Penpusher
    Replied to answer on August 13, 2020 at 4:33 pm

    Hmm, original I had something about losing his family in a raid, but was worried was over doing it. I also didn’t want this other version to be horrible. As I want this to be difficult, it’s either swap or go back to your own life, to get everything you’ve lost. He is desperate and is at breaking poRead more

    Hmm, original I had something about losing his family in a raid, but was worried was over doing it.

    I also didn’t want this other version to be horrible. As I want this to be difficult, it’s either swap or go back to your own life, to get everything you’ve lost.

    He is desperate and is at breaking point in his own world, but he is moral, good person just pushed and this is only way out so until about the midpoint the question is will he replace this guy and will become can he make a new life for himself.

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2020In: Western

    After being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.

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    Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 7:55 am

    Is the body part controlling him? Otherwise isn’t he just going through rehab? So how does him having the arm make him the person to need to stop the gang

    Is the body part controlling him? Otherwise isn’t he just going through rehab? So how does him having the arm make him the person to need to stop the gang

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  3. Posted: June 28, 2020In: Examples

    In the depths of the depression, a small time con artist teams up with a seasoned pro to con $500,000 from a ruthless mobster to avenge the mobster’s murder of his mentor.

    Knightrider1984 Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 28, 2020 at 7:51 am

    Only thing I am not sure of is what is the inciting incident is (Death of partner, offer to rob) Like Karel mentioned, I think putting the death up top provides motivation Also why does the pro want in? If a pro I imagine doing well. If the pro was ‘washed up’ or this was a chance at redemptionRead more

    Only thing I am not sure of is what is the inciting incident is (Death of partner, offer to rob)

    Like Karel mentioned, I think putting the death up top provides motivation

    Also why does the pro want in? If a pro I imagine doing well. If the pro was ‘washed up’ or this was a chance at redemption as well?

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