1. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    When a small town get’s hit by a thunderstorm, and every road is blocked. The towns peoples only help is an old delusional woodsman who once was rejected by the town. In order to get his help they must appeal to him so that the town can get back on it’s feet again

    Korvtraktor Penpusher

    I like the idea of an outcast being the only hope for an entire town! Maybe clarify in the logline who our main character is.

    I like the idea of an outcast being the only hope for an entire town! Maybe clarify in the logline who our main character is.

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  2. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    When a good-for-nothing architect after a divorce is rejected by his 6 year-old son, he signs up for a competition to create the towns new playground and win back his sons respect.

    Korvtraktor Penpusher

    Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. "When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the towns new playground in order to win back the respect of his son.

    Like the father-son relationship. Maybe have the father before the son in the logline as he is the main character. “When a looser architect gets divorced and his son turns on him, he must win a competion to create the towns new playground in order to win back the respect of his son.

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  3. Posted: September 7, 2020In:

    When a policewoman’s missing childhood friend returns after 24 years without having aged a day, she must infiltrate a group of futuristic time-travelers in order to save his younger self.

    Korvtraktor Penpusher

    Interesting concept! What is he saving himself from? How does his childhood friend returning make him realize he himself is in danger?

    Interesting concept! What is he saving himself from? How does his childhood friend returning make him realize he himself is in danger?

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