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I'm new to this, so take my advice with a grain of salt - It reads a little confusingly right now - maybe re-arrange the order of some of the elements - "Thinking she's the last of her race, a lonely barmaid must fight for her survival after discovering the power that sustains all life while being hRead more
I’m new to this, so take my advice with a grain of salt – It reads a little confusingly right now – maybe re-arrange the order of some of the elements –
“Thinking she’s the last of her race, a lonely barmaid must fight for her survival after discovering the power that sustains all life while being hunted down by a vengeful superhuman.”
I think “depends on her own survival” & “fight for her life” are redundant, just pick one.
Try not to use the same word twice – “life” I replaced one with “survival”
I hope this helps.
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