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After a curse warning, a defiant Napoleon fires cannon blasting the nose off Sphinx of Giza: realizing his troop are dying strangely one by one, he battles to unravel the curse of its invisible revenging guardian demon
Lots happening in this logline. A few questions: Who is the protagonist in this story? Who is the antagonist? Remember When?[a major event happens],?[the hero],?must?[do the main action].
Lots happening in this logline. A few questions:
Who is the protagonist in this story?
Who is the antagonist?
Remember
When?[a major event happens],?[the hero],?must?[do the main action].
See lessNovel: A french teenager runs away to fulfill his dream of becoming an actor in L.A.
How about something like "To prove to his family that he's not worthless, a French teenager goes to LA to become an actor."If you don't like that, you have to think about what it is that drives him to go to LA. What is he trying to prove, and to whom?? If he fails, in what specific way will that affRead more
How about something like “To prove to his family that he’s not worthless, a French teenager goes to LA to become an actor.”
If you don’t like that, you have to think about what it is that drives him to go to LA. What is he trying to prove, and to whom?? If he fails, in what specific way will that affect him?
Maybe he’s doing it to get the girl he’s always loved, and the girl is determined she’ll only ever marry a movie star. Or maybe he’s doing it to prove to his?dying and hopeless?little brother that miracles?do happen if you try hard enough.
See lessA soldier returns from war to bury his parents and tend to his sister who remains in a coma. He soon discovers her constant sexual abuse and seeks revenge on her behalf. ~this is a revenge film in the vein of Taken meets Identity~
Part of what made Taken work was the MC's estrangement from his daughter, so that when he rescues her it also redeems their relationship. Any way you could add that to this logline, like "A soldier estranged from his family returns home to bury his parents, and seeks revenge after discovering his siRead more
Part of what made Taken work was the MC’s estrangement from his daughter, so that when he rescues her it also redeems their relationship. Any way you could add that to this logline, like
“A soldier estranged from his family returns home to bury his parents, and seeks revenge after discovering his sister has been sexually abused.”
I feel like making her comatose makes it less compelling – sure it’s still abuse, but she’s unresponsive and therefore not a great character for us to feel empathy for.
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