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A group of criminals see their escape from prison when an infamous prison breaker arrive. The problem however : he doesn’t want to escape anymore.
Hi, I agree with lots of the points already made - making it about one person, and sticking a bit closer to the formula. ?A problem is that 'the event' is the arrival of a person - so it makes the logline clunky to avoid confusing pronouns. ?This isn't quite right but I feel might be a move in the rRead more
Hi, I agree with lots of the points already made – making it about one person, and sticking a bit closer to the formula. ?A problem is that ‘the event’ is the arrival of a person – so it makes the logline clunky to avoid confusing pronouns. ?This isn’t quite right but I feel might be a move in the right direction:
When an infamous escapologist is transferred to his cell block; a desperate prisoner must convince the escapologist to help him escape or never see his dying wife again.
a question I have: what sets this apart from other prison break movies? is it simply the reluctance of the expert escapologist? or is there something else that could also go in the logline? can you give the prison break plot a unique spin ?
good luck!
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