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A human orphan raised in outer space must overcome his sense of abandonment to help Elvis Presley protect a time machine from an alien hellbent on destroying the galaxy.
Hi solidjim, i like the concept of an Elvis/time machines sci-fi ?but have a few questions on the logline that ight hopefully tease this out a bit more 1. what do abandonment issues have to do with saving the galaxy? why are abandonment issues relevant? 2. why is a human orphan raised in outer spaceRead more
Hi solidjim,
i like the concept of an Elvis/time machines sci-fi ?but have a few questions on the logline that ight hopefully tease this out a bit more
1. what do abandonment issues have to do with saving the galaxy? why are abandonment issues relevant?
2. why is a human orphan raised in outer space the best protagonist here?
3. or is elvis the protagonist?
4. what’s the call to action?
good luck!
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It would be really helpful to find out whether people prefer a clearer but longer version: When he starts visualizing the sexual fantasies of anyone he touches, a love-struck freshman discovers he?s destined to takeover Hell, but the Devil gives him one week to find true love and avoid his fate.
It would be really helpful to find out whether people prefer a clearer but longer version:
See lessWhen he starts visualizing the sexual fantasies of anyone he touches, a love-struck freshman discovers he?s destined to takeover Hell, but the Devil gives him one week to find true love and avoid his fate.
When he starts visualizing the sexual fantasies of anyone he touches, a love-struck freshman has one week to find true love or be doomed to rule hell. Title: SixSixSix
Hi nouveau, thanks for your feedback. ?it's INCREDIBLY USEFUL. Yes it's "Omen" turned into a gross-out comedy. ? The devil is the antagonist and he wants to hand over the reins to his son, the unwitting protagonist. ? ?I'll try reworking it to get the antagonist in and the concept clearer.
Hi nouveau, thanks for your feedback. ?it’s INCREDIBLY USEFUL.
See lessYes it’s “Omen” turned into a gross-out comedy. ? The devil is the antagonist and he wants to hand over the reins to his son, the unwitting protagonist. ? ?I’ll try reworking it to get the antagonist in and the concept clearer.