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Charles needs to rebuild his relationship with his son. Michael needs to stop Zoe from having their baby, whilst Andrew needs to get Rachael pregnant! And Jason has a secret that is going to shock everyone. The brotherhood is about to become the Fatherhood. And its likely there will be some casualties along the way.
The storyline? is unique it feels like there would be many different angles going at once, and the foreshadowing is excellent. But covering all the characters in detail in a logline seems like to much, maybe a descriptor like "a charismatic group of friends" might help.
The storyline? is unique it feels like there would be many different angles going at once, and the foreshadowing is excellent. But covering all the characters in detail in a logline seems like to much, maybe a descriptor like “a charismatic group of friends” might help.
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This is interesting and feels like it could be an intense thriller. But the logline feels bulky. If it can be consolidated into one sentence that might help.
This is interesting and feels like it could be an intense thriller. But the logline feels bulky. If it can be consolidated into one sentence that might help.
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