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  1. Posted: August 8, 2024In: Short Film

    When a memory-wiped babysitter stumbles upon a bloodied photograph of a child in her home, she must seek clues to uncover the child’s identity before a lurking neighbour contacts the authorities.

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    Added an answer on August 10, 2024 at 7:45 am

    When a resourceful, but forgetful young babysitter stumbles upon a bloodied photograph of another child while on caring duty, she seeks clues to uncover this child’s identity. But when a nosy neighbour contacts authorities, she must take on adult responsibilities to protect the children, or risk furRead more

    When a resourceful, but forgetful young babysitter stumbles upon a bloodied photograph of another child while on caring duty,
    she seeks clues to uncover this child’s identity.
    But when a nosy neighbour contacts authorities,
    she must take on adult responsibilities to protect the children, or risk further blood shed.

    theme = individual responsibility leads to community well being

    – consider a positive protagonist trait – “resourceful”?
    – consider neighbour as the primary antagonist – maybe they are the murder?

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  2. Posted: July 26, 2024In: Short Film

    Un amigo que quiere decir como se siente con su vida, pero no se siente comprendido por su amigo

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    Added an answer on July 28, 2024 at 7:11 am

    [English translation] "A friend who wants to say how he feels about his life, but does not feel understood by his friend." When an empathetic, but oversensitive young protagonist experiences being taken for granted by a self-centered friend he must learn to adopt an easygoing nature, or risk never bRead more

    [English translation] “A friend who wants to say how he feels about his life, but does not feel understood by his friend.”

    When an empathetic, but oversensitive young protagonist
    experiences being taken for granted by a self-centered friend
    he must learn to adopt an easygoing nature, or risk never being about to forgive his best friend.

    theme: self-care leads to care for others
    protagonist’s want: Friend Centered…
    protagonist’s need: Self-Centered…

    [Spanish translation]
    Cuando un joven protagonista empático pero hipersensible
    Experiencias que un amigo egocéntrico da por sentado.
    debe aprender a adoptar una naturaleza tranquila o correr el riesgo de no perdonar nunca a su mejor amigo.

    Tema: El autocuidado conduce al cuidado de los demás.
    Deseo del protagonista: Centrado en el amigo…
    Necesidad del protagonista: Egocéntrico…

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  3. Posted: July 10, 2024In: Fantasy

    In the arid plains of the Far West of Aredon, we follow the adventures of Caleb “Lee” Leezard, a solitary bounty hunter in search of the origins of his strange power, and the powerful Baron Von Falkenrath who tries to seize it at any cost.

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    Added an answer on July 18, 2024 at 9:50 am

    When a disciplined, solitary bounty hunter learns his strange power originates from a greedy Baron, who is trying to seize it back at any cost, he must now learn to integrate this power or for ever suffer a life of loneliness. theme = solitary power leads to loneliness protagonist's want = to be aloRead more

    When a disciplined, solitary bounty hunter
    learns his strange power originates from a greedy Baron, who is trying to seize it back at any cost,
    he must now learn to integrate this power or for ever suffer a life of loneliness.

    theme = solitary power leads to loneliness
    protagonist’s want = to be alone
    protagonist’s need = friendship

    Consider adding a likablity trait to protagonist, suggestion might be positive qualities of a disciplined character.

    Consider adding a negative trait to antagonist, suggestion might be greediness, for power in this case.

    This logline contains Character, Plot, but no clear Theme. Consider how Character’s main goal and traits relate to a story message.

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