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  1. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Family

    When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.

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    Replied to answer on July 4, 2020 at 8:33 am

    Yes, I've done what you advised and written it for its most important audience—producers. Thanks for your well-reasoned advice. THE MAGIC APPLES is now entered in the ScreenCraft Drama Competition, the Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards, and Launch Pad's Feature Competition for 2020. YouRead more

    Yes, I’ve done what you advised and written it for its most important audience—producers. Thanks for your well-reasoned advice. THE MAGIC APPLES is now entered in the ScreenCraft Drama Competition, the Los Angeles International Screenplay Awards, and Launch Pad’s Feature Competition for 2020. You may read and critique my work for free on Coverfly X Peer Notes. Please feel free to do so, everyone. This story is based on true miraculous events during the Cedar Fire of 2003, and you will not be bored—I promise.

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  2. Posted: July 2, 2020In: Family

    When a gigantic firestorm burns through a family’s horse ranch in October 2003, the miracles it leaves behind bring Grant, an accomplished physicist, to the brink of believing in something more powerful than science.

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    Replied to answer on July 2, 2020 at 5:53 am

    Thanks for your appraisal. Writing a good logline is incredibly hard, isn't it? Its a trade off. In this case I'm giving you Grant's inciting incident: his fatal fall at 8-years-old that he miraculously survived somehow. Miracles and scientists don't get along. Now he's dealing with whatever these mRead more

    Thanks for your appraisal. Writing a good logline is incredibly hard, isn’t it? Its a trade off. In this case I’m giving you Grant’s inciting incident: his fatal fall at 8-years-old that he miraculously survived somehow. Miracles and scientists don’t get along. Now he’s dealing with whatever these magic apples are. The last line is what he wants.

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