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A group of subjects in a sleep experiment are stalked by multidimensional entities awakened to rip their spirits apart.
I like the sound of this, but to echo the other comment, I think you could have a protagonist at the start of this. Who or what has awakened the multidimensional entities? I'm not sure what 'rio their spirits apart' means = could you make the stakes / threat more specific? (i.e. does it mean their dRead more
I like the sound of this, but to echo the other comment, I think you could have a protagonist at the start of this. Who or what has awakened the multidimensional entities? I’m not sure what ‘rio their spirits apart’ means = could you make the stakes / threat more specific? (i.e. does it mean their deaths in the ‘real’ world?)
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