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  1. Posted: June 7, 2018In: Comedy

    Down on his luck Security Guard Brooklyn Merewether?s day isn?t off to a good start but things are about to change as he saves the life of someone who has the power to make his existence a bit more enjoyable, a bit more tolerable, actually a lot damn better… he saves Cupid.

    Leon Davis Logliner
    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 9:14 am

    Seems too long and disjointed. Don't use names. Remember the basics: Main character, Event and his action in response. Perhaps: When a luckless Security Guard saves the life of Cupid he must examine his own motivation before he can celebrate real romance.

    Seems too long and disjointed. Don’t use names.
    Remember the basics: Main character, Event and his action in response.

    Perhaps:

    When a luckless Security Guard saves the life of Cupid he must examine his own motivation before he can celebrate real romance.

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  2. Posted: June 1, 2018In: Drama

    When a bikie moll overloads a light aircraft, forcing a crash landing that traps her, she must confess and coerce the reluctant pilot to hide the contents of her luggage before rescuers arrive.

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    Added an answer on June 8, 2018 at 9:00 am

    When a bikie moll overloads a light aircraft, forcing a crash landing that traps her, she must confess and pay the pilot to hide the body hidden in her luggage, before rescuers arrive. There are dual protagonists.

    When a bikie moll overloads a light aircraft, forcing a crash landing that traps her, she must confess and pay the pilot to hide the body hidden in her luggage, before rescuers arrive.

    There are dual protagonists.

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  3. Posted: June 1, 2018In: Drama

    When a bikie moll overloads a light aircraft, forcing a crash landing that traps her, she must confess and coerce the reluctant pilot to hide the contents of her luggage before rescuers arrive.

    Leon Davis Logliner
    Added an answer on June 7, 2018 at 8:52 am

    When a bikie moll overloads a light aircraft, forcing a crash landing that traps her, she must confess and pay the financially crippled pilot to hide the body in her luggage, before rescuers arrive.

    When a bikie moll overloads a light aircraft, forcing a crash landing that traps her, she must confess and pay the financially crippled pilot to hide the body in her luggage, before rescuers arrive.

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