1. Posted: April 5, 2023In:

    A guilt ridden hacker sets about repaying the damage he caused with his hacking.

    Lexington101 Penpusher

    What is the result of his action (repaying the damage he caused) ? Does: this set into motion a series of events that are beyond his control, he realizes his true purpose in life, discovers his long lost son... What happens?

    What is the result of his action (repaying the damage he caused) ? Does: this set into motion a series of events that are beyond his control, he realizes his true purpose in life, discovers his long lost son… What happens?

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  2. Posted: March 16, 2023In:

    The global rise of demonic possessions brings together five exorcists from different faiths to combat an evil unlike any they have ever encountered.

    Lexington101 Penpusher

    I agree with Richiev, Further, as you mention 'different Faiths' I'm expecting a preview of some payoff, do they have to compromise to work together? Does the combination of faith make them stronger? "Five faiths are better than one!"

    I agree with Richiev, Further, as you mention ‘different Faiths’ I’m expecting a preview of some payoff, do they have to compromise to work together? Does the combination of faith make them stronger? “Five faiths are better than one!”

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  3. Posted: March 23, 2023In:

    After a shadow figure haunts his son, an impulsive man embarks on a journey to his childhood home to reconnect with his violent father and avoid passing on generational trauma.

    Lexington101 Penpusher

    This is good, but what I would like to see cleared up is the ' shadow figure haunts his son' how does this fit into the rest of the story? Does it come back that the father knows who this figure is? Does this figure remind him of the past? At the moment I don't see how it ties into the big picture.

    This is good, but what I would like to see cleared up is the ‘ shadow figure haunts his son’ how does this fit into the rest of the story? Does it come back that the father knows who this figure is? Does this figure remind him of the past? At the moment I don’t see how it ties into the big picture.

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