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  1. Posted: February 20, 2020In: Comedy

    After his wife of 48 years asks for a divorce, an eccentric old codger embraces single life and modern dating in the search for a new girlfriend.

    LingeringThoughts Penpusher
    Added an answer on February 21, 2020 at 11:54 pm

    This is a cool idea, and I really get a sense of personality from the way you described the old man as an eccentric, old codger! I can imagine the shenanigans he would get himself into around dating apps and catching up with 'new ways'. Logline is pretty concise (I agree with dpg on the 'divorce' woRead more

    This is a cool idea, and I really get a sense of personality from the way you described the old man as an eccentric, old codger! I can imagine the shenanigans he would get himself into around dating apps and catching up with ‘new ways’. Logline is pretty concise (I agree with dpg on the ‘divorce’ wording) and it generally sounds great!

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  2. Posted: February 20, 2020In: Thriller

    An airline crew smuggling a $2 million diamond on board begins to get murdered one by one. [Title: Fight or Flight}

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    Added an answer on February 21, 2020 at 11:49 pm

    I like the short, simple style of this logline, but I would agree with the last reviewer that it needs a little more personality. Maybe allude to the murders, but don't let us know so much of what will happen.

    I like the short, simple style of this logline, but I would agree with the last reviewer that it needs a little more personality. Maybe allude to the murders, but don’t let us know so much of what will happen.

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