Thank you all- lots to think about. It would seem that I have been treating the logline for this dramedy TV show too simply. Whilst an error- I had it that way as my intention was to treat the material separate to the three-sentence synopsis (from what I have been reading, it’s suggested to keep the logline different to the synopsis).? Based on all the feedback (much thanks) I’ll create a new? two-sentence logline that includes a ‘but’ and I’ll expand upon my synopsis. to be a five-sentence paragraph. Cheers!