1. Posted: May 5, 2019In:

    Recent arrival in Australia, ?a black Swedish girl is confronted with the news her new husband has been accidentally killed while working as a farm laborer. Together with new friend s, 4 ?very ?desparate women confront more than the land owner. The church, ?the governmment a labor hire company all have a stake in stopping them from uncovering the bigger story behind his death.

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    I'm liking these last two but it's seems Richie's has ?got it to a manageable length. I will study his nuances carefully. Really appreciate the feed ack y'all !!

    I’m liking these last two but it’s seems Richie’s has ?got it to a manageable length. I will study his nuances carefully. Really appreciate the feed ack y’all !!

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  2. Posted: May 1, 2019In:

    After an explosion opens a hole for demons to escape from Hell, the dweller of humanity, aka the devil’s son, goes to earth to run up the demons before Yahweh sends his armies to clean up the mess, sending every demons into oblivion along with the dweller, if he’s still there.

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    Demons take? the Devils son through a portal that opens up in hell. Yahweh is called upon but for Yahweh to exist so does the devils son.

    Demons take? the Devils son through a portal that opens up in hell. Yahweh is called upon but for Yahweh to exist so does the devils son.

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  3. Posted: May 1, 2019In:

    After a lonely orphan discovers she belongs to an almost-extinct race that guards the source of all life, she must fight to protect mankind from the only other of her people, her parents killer.

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    I don't really know how to critique. So I just find the meaning in what's written as I understand it. An orphan finds that she belongs to a race of people who are nearly extinct.? In finding her place means ,she is now the guardian of humanity and must find the killer who also killed her parents.

    I don’t really know how to critique. So I just find the meaning in what’s written as I understand it.

    An orphan finds that she belongs to a race of people who are nearly extinct.? In finding her place means ,she is now the guardian of humanity and must find the killer who also killed her parents.

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