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A 17 year old punk, with dreams of becoming a professional MMA fighter, comes to terms with his rage, while looking after a deaf blind boy in a rough underclass community.
Saying he has a dream of becoming... makes it a passive thing. What is his objective goal? to become a fighter? it has to be more active than just a dream. Is he fighting for his dream to come true? Is the blind boy an obstacle to this goal? Maybe ask yourself: What does my protagonist want in the sRead more
Saying he has a dream of becoming… makes it a passive thing. What is his objective goal? to become a fighter? it has to be more active than just a dream. Is he fighting for his dream to come true? Is the blind boy an obstacle to this goal? Maybe ask yourself: What does my protagonist want in the story, what is his objective goal, and what is standing in his way of obtaining that goal?
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