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  1. Posted: February 2, 2024In: Comedy

    When a 75 year old woman manage to hack into CIA, she´s hunted by the hardest cyber-cop you’ll ever find – her own son

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    Added an answer on February 4, 2024 at 3:44 am

    This is a great premise for a comedy. It doesn't give a lot away about how the two characters relate to one another yet. But there's a lot of potential. I love the idea that the son comes over to his mother's for dinner and discusses the cyber criminal he's chasing, their unusual methods and the ramRead more

    This is a great premise for a comedy. It doesn’t give a lot away about how the two characters relate to one another yet. But there’s a lot of potential.

    I love the idea that the son comes over to his mother’s for dinner and discusses the cyber criminal he’s chasing, their unusual methods and the ramifications their hack could potentially have for the forthcoming presidential election… and the mother, who has a totally different political outlook and supports Trump for president, sees an opportunity to skew the election and Make America Great Again.

    The possibilities are endless though! Lots of fun to be had.

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  2. Posted: February 2, 2024In: Adventure

    A German teenager craving social acceptance unexpectedly time-travels from 1914 to 1933 and must choose: find belonging in the Hitler Youth or break his daughter out of a prison camp.

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    Added an answer on February 2, 2024 at 6:34 am

    A rewritten logline and elevator pitch. I'd love your feedback - particularly on its clarity and narrative potential.

    A rewritten logline and elevator pitch. I’d love your feedback – particularly on its clarity and narrative potential.

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  3. Posted: November 29, 2023In: Coming of Age

    In 1933 Germany, a time-travelling teenage outsider from 1914 discovers that his daughter has become entangled with a communist terror group. Now, he must infiltrate the organisation to protect her from the dangerous path she’s chosen, all whilst wrestling with the seductive pull of the rising Nazi youth movement.

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    Replied to answer on December 1, 2023 at 2:51 am

    Thank you for the positivity and for the much improved brevity! It's my first time sharing this idea so it means a lot to have affirmation :)

    Thank you for the positivity and for the much improved brevity! It’s my first time sharing this idea so it means a lot to have affirmation 🙂

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