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  1. Posted: September 13, 2020In: Drama

    A Jamaican immigrant, stressed by life in the US, takes her tween son on a getaway to her homeland she won’t soon forget.

    malaika Penpusher
    Replied to answer on September 20, 2020 at 4:25 am

    Thank you for your clarifying questions! I'll incorporate their answers into the revision of the logline.

    Thank you for your clarifying questions! I’ll incorporate their answers into the revision of the logline.

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  2. Posted: September 13, 2020In: Drama

    A Jamaican immigrant, stressed by life in the US, takes her tween son on a getaway to her homeland she won’t soon forget.

    malaika Penpusher
    Replied to answer on September 20, 2020 at 4:24 am

    Great points. Thank you for the feedback!

    Great points. Thank you for the feedback!

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  3. Posted: September 13, 2020In: Action

    After bring left for dead, an immortal fighter comes out of retirement starts a underground fighting promotion and goes after those who killed him with his fists.

    malaika Penpusher
    Added an answer on September 13, 2020 at 9:13 pm

    Echoing Richiev sentiments, the protagonist does sound like bad guy. There are a couple of typos as well that make for a less than smooth read.

    Echoing Richiev sentiments, the protagonist does sound like bad guy. There are a couple of typos as well that make for a less than smooth read.

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