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  1. Posted: October 3, 2023In: Drama

    A talented Fil-Am restaurateur returns to his country of birth where he is challenged by an unscrupulous boyhood friend, with a promise of co-ownership, to transform his failing Manila restaurant to number one on TripAdvisor.

    Marc Zanetta Penpusher
    Replied to answer on October 4, 2023 at 5:27 pm

    Many thanks for your feedback. I agree with you. I just don't want to word it too much. But you are correct regarding the stakes, because there are stakes in this script, so must be worded in the logline, as all loglines need a stake....I've given it another bash at it............. A talented Fil-AmRead more

    Many thanks for your feedback. I agree with you. I just don’t want to word it too much. But you are correct regarding the stakes, because there are stakes in this script, so must be worded in the logline, as all loglines need a stake….I’ve given it another bash at it………….
    A talented Fil-Am restaurateur visits his country of birth where an unscrupulous boyhood friend dupes him into not being able to return to his life in America, with a challenge, and a promise of co-ownership, to transform his failing Manila restaurant to number one on TripAdvisor.

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