1. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When a nuclear war breaks out near the borders of his country, A 78 year old Ex Veteran leaves his home with his widowed neighbor in hopes to get to safety; but when they learn that she has been exposed to radiation and don’t have much time to flee to safety, he must make a hard decision, leave her at an abandoned country hotel or to stay with her till the end.

    Mark Penpusher

    I can definitely see the ending being set to Billy Joel's 'Vienna.' Very fitting.

    I can definitely see the ending being set to Billy Joel’s ‘Vienna.’ Very fitting.

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  2. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When a translucent humanoid creature gets his memory back, he sets out to become the worlds judge, jury and executioner based on his way of life, while dealing with a group of people that disagree with his ways and try to stop him at any cost

    Mark Penpusher

    It might be beneficial to set the story after the events of the main character taking over the world, with him reflecting on his actions and trying to justify them to the audience.

    It might be beneficial to set the story after the events of the main character taking over the world, with him reflecting on his actions and trying to justify them to the audience.

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2022In:

    When confronted with violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must defend himself while still staying true to his beliefs

    Mark Penpusher

    Maybe do some research into the technicalities of Buddhism as a way to defeat the bully, maybe as a subversion of the traditional pacifist Buddhist, he defeats the bully with cunning instead of moralising.

    Maybe do some research into the technicalities of Buddhism as a way to defeat the bully, maybe as a subversion of the traditional pacifist Buddhist, he defeats the bully with cunning instead of moralising.

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