Hey Ruthie.

I think this is really strong. It’s active, tension is there.?Your logline is?nice and compact. But it’s also a bit language dense.?Two words to think about removing/revising….

1) ‘Confident’: Years of story that’s come before you tells us that a Police Chief in Texas Hill Country is a?confident person. The only time I’d modify it is if he wasn’t confident, i.e., a reluctant chief who inherits his role.

1) ‘dangerous’ seems to be an unnecessary word that complicates because you then tell us exactly what you mean by dangerous: ‘could cost him his job, his family and his sanity.’ ?If true, you can add tension with something like ?….’ and possibly his life.’