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  1. Posted: June 22, 2022In: Student Loglines

    When a delusional young woman is confronted by the closure of her uncle’s vintage car dealership, she must travel cross-country to see it one last time.

    MartyDawes Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 23, 2022 at 7:10 am

    I think the proper format should be:WHEN (An EVENT happens), a (CHARACTER) MUST (do the ACTION)

    I think the proper format should be:WHEN (An EVENT happens), a (CHARACTER) MUST (do the ACTION)

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  2. Posted: June 22, 2022In: Student Loglines

    When told that the fate of the insane is worse than that of a normal prisoner, a murderer who plans to pretend to be insane must attempt to make the court consider him a sane murderer.

    MartyDawes Penpusher
    Added an answer on June 23, 2022 at 6:55 am

    it's a bit wordy - Any way to simplify it?

    it’s a bit wordy – Any way to simplify it?

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