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  1. Posted: September 10, 2019In: SciFi

    In a 22nd century crime-free world, self-regulated by an omnipotent social media structure, a remorseless policeman, re-purposed to chase down and kill individuals who have not met minimum popularity requirements, tries to survive and rebel after himself failing the social media diktat.

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    Added an answer on September 10, 2019 at 9:03 pm

    All good points. Thanks much for taking the time. I will mull things over and be back.

    All good points. Thanks much for taking the time. I will mull things over and be back.

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  2. Posted: September 10, 2019In: SciFi

    In a 22nd century crime-free world, self-regulated by an omnipotent social media structure, a remorseless policeman, re-purposed to chase down and kill individuals who have not met minimum popularity requirements, tries to survive and rebel after himself failing the social media diktat.

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    Added an answer on September 10, 2019 at 4:35 am

    Interesting point. Maybe I went a little too far with the killing. I will give this some thoughts. I have question: In that logline, I haven't specified the ''inciting incident''... I left it as ''... after himself failing the social media diktat'' ... is this too vague for a logline ?

    Interesting point. Maybe I went a little too far with the killing. I will give this some thoughts.

    I have question: In that logline, I haven’t specified the ”inciting incident”… I left it as ”… after himself failing the social media diktat” … is this too vague for a logline ?

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2019In: SciFi

    In a futuristic crime-free world, self-regulated by an omnipotent social media structure, an introspective policeman, re-purposed to chase down individuals who have not met minimum popularity standards, becomes disillusioned with is role and starts a quest for a mystic island where citizen live free from digital coercion.

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    Added an answer on August 28, 2019 at 1:34 am

    My inspiration comes from a mix of Fahrenheit 451 (policemen re-purposed vs. fire fighters in 451) and Logan's run (i.e. an enforcer in a dystopian world that rebels against its alienation)... but not sure how everything can fall nicely into place... not yet fully satisfied...

    My inspiration comes from a mix of Fahrenheit 451 (policemen re-purposed vs. fire fighters in 451) and Logan’s run (i.e. an enforcer in a dystopian world that rebels against its alienation)… but not sure how everything can fall nicely into place… not yet fully satisfied…

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