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  1. Posted: September 25, 2015In: Horror

    After a werewolf saughters the family of a pregnant newlywed and she loses her child, she becomes a cold-hearted hunter and uncovers it’s her best friend.

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    Added an answer on October 6, 2015 at 11:29 pm

    Thanks everybody!? Good stuff!

    Thanks everybody!? Good stuff!

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  2. Posted: September 25, 2015In: SciFi

    A law-abiding citizen finds himself in a notorious gangland bar awaiting the arrival of his future self: a killer on the run who needs his help to stay alive.

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    Added an answer on September 25, 2015 at 2:17 am

    Very interesting concept, but seems a little confusing. I had to read it several times to get the gist of the story. If I understand it, he as the killer is seeking the help of his young self to stay alive, which begs the question ? if he is such an up-right young man, why would he help is future kiRead more

    Very interesting concept, but seems a little confusing. I had to read it several times to get the gist of the story. If I understand it, he as the killer is seeking the help of his young self to stay alive, which begs the question ? if he is such an up-right young man, why would he help is future killer self? I am guessing here, but I imagine the story delves into that choice, and why is it is ultimate fear. Does he have homicidal tendencies as a young man? Does he struggle with those urges, but discovers he ultimately gave in to them and now sees the man he will become and must choose?

    These are the questions that pop into my mind when reading it, overall thought, I like the concept.

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  3. Posted: September 25, 2015In: Drama

    A desperate CEO’s legally ambiguous plans to save his company are undermined when he is blackmailed by a mysterious ex-employee.

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    Added an answer on September 25, 2015 at 1:57 am

    Overall, it relates the story.? However, and this is just me, I would drop the word "legally."? To me, this would add a sense that your main character walks a line trying to save the company, which gives support to the blackmail.? The story should bare out the legalities of the plan, and if the blacRead more

    Overall, it relates the story.? However, and this is just me, I would drop the word “legally.”? To me, this would add a sense that your main character walks a line trying to save the company, which gives support to the blackmail.? The story should bare out the legalities of the plan, and if the blackmailer is just or not.? Just my thoughts Stevey.? From the logline, the story sound tense.

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