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  1. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Drama

    Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

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    Added an answer on June 21, 2017 at 10:24 am

    In the first episode the Indonesian woman is meeting, let's call the other character Karl. Indonesia meets Karl after Sofie (person three) explains that Karl is really is.... This is an portion of the pilot script. * SOFIE Well you know KARL Flashback sequence here We get a sense that INDONESIA knowRead more

    In the first episode the Indonesian woman is meeting, let’s call the other character Karl.
    Indonesia meets Karl after Sofie (person three) explains that Karl is really is….
    This is an portion of the pilot script.
    *
    SOFIE
    Well you know KARL

    Flashback sequence here

    We get a sense that INDONESIA knows a bit TOO much about KARL

    INDONESIA
    Yeah, which accent is he using on some defenseless helpless rich guy this time?

    SOFIE
    His name is Tyler, hes from eastern Turkey here on a Rhodester scholarship. He?s the youngest of 7 brothers who picked on him terribly as a child. He could never never date in school because her brother’s would deem it IMPOSSIBLE so he focused on his studies and he sends everything he can back home to help protect his family from the violence going on and to simply put food on the table.

    INDONESIA Rolls her eyes then bursts out in laughter as the train doors open and they walk off

    INDONESIA
    I mean, WHERE does she get it from? HOW does she get away with this- don’t guys realizeeven falling for this?

    SOFIE
    Similar to items you don’t get on holidays or your birthday- It’s called a gift my dear. Just like what a tight, Spanish guys job to clean the pool.
    Shirtless.
    Preferably in speedos.

    A Spanish woman and her child shoot him a dirty look, INDONESIA- obviously embarrassed.

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  2. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Drama

    Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

    mii Logliner
    Added an answer on June 21, 2017 at 10:13 am

    I have four main charecters however three are only introduced in the first episode.

    I have four main charecters however three are only introduced in the first episode.

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  3. Posted: June 21, 2017In: Drama

    Seduced into a world of drugs, sex, and money after abandoning her loved ones, model-slash-actress hopeful must determine if losing herself, is worth it to become a star.

    mii Logliner
    Added an answer on June 21, 2017 at 9:50 am

    There is a "fifth" character- this one isn't truly introduced because he is already one of the main charecters. The beginning of episode two shows this fifth person essentially giving a blowjob in exchange for drugs, we do not see this person's face- the camera will be positioned in such a way thatRead more

    There is a “fifth” character- this one isn’t truly introduced because he is already one of the main charecters.
    The beginning of episode two shows this fifth person essentially giving a blowjob in exchange for drugs, we do not see this person’s face- the camera will be positioned in such a way that the audience doesn’t completely lose sight of everything going on.
    After small conversation (“5th” has a southern accent, without the camera breaking, this person walks away and attempts to jump on the metro, but it reads insufficient funds, said person walks over to the counter but has no accent at this point)

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