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  1. Posted: April 11, 2022In: SciFi

    In a future where children must be raised by AI, the director of the largest AI firm risks arrest and death when she chooses to raise her infant son by herself.

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    Added an answer on April 13, 2022 at 10:47 am

    I think you need something that forces her to make this decision. I don't see an event that triggers her to make this decision other than she just wants to. You need to show a reason for why she HAS TO raise her child rather than let the AI raise them. Maybe after giving birth she discovers a horribRead more

    I think you need something that forces her to make this decision. I don’t see an event that triggers her to make this decision other than she just wants to. You need to show a reason for why she HAS TO raise her child rather than let the AI raise them. Maybe after giving birth she discovers a horrible truth about how the AI are raising the children and that makes her want to raise the child herself?

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  2. Posted: December 2, 2019In: Adventure

    When an explorer’s ancient necklace is stolen, she must retrieve it before it is used for evil.

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    Added an answer on December 4, 2019 at 7:20 am

    Update: When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a witch's tomb, is stolen by a descendant of the witch, an inexperienced explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.

    Update:

    When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a witch’s tomb, is stolen by a descendant of the witch, an inexperienced explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.

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  3. Posted: December 2, 2019In: Adventure

    When an explorer’s ancient necklace is stolen, she must retrieve it before it is used for evil.

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    Added an answer on December 3, 2019 at 4:19 pm

    Updated Logline: When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a tomb full of horrors, is stolen by a descendant of the corpse, a spry young explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.

    Updated Logline:

    When her ancient necklace, which is also the key to a tomb full of horrors, is stolen by a descendant of the corpse, a spry young explorer must retrieve the necklace before the evil is released.

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