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Following the discovery of an enemy radar station?s location, a pilot?s brash behavior threatens his chance to destroy it and earn the respect he craves.
Am I still clueless or am I getting closer? "Near the end of the second world war, on a spy mission over Burma, a cynical co-pilot banks on unconventional tactics to save his crew."
Am I still clueless or am I getting closer?
“Near the end of the second world war, on a spy mission over Burma, a cynical co-pilot banks on unconventional tactics to save his crew.”
See lessFollowing the discovery of an enemy radar station?s location, a pilot?s brash behavior threatens his chance to destroy it and earn the respect he craves.
Nir I'm confused by your review. I would respond by stating that: The discovery of the station's location is the inciting incident, The protagonist is clearly the pilot, His character flaw that threatens his goal is his behavior, His objective is the destruction of the station and, The stakes (asideRead more
Nir
I’m confused by your review.
I would respond by stating that:
The discovery of the station’s location is the inciting incident,
The protagonist is clearly the pilot,
His character flaw that threatens his goal is his behavior,
His objective is the destruction of the station and,
The stakes (aside from destroying the station and what that implies) is the respect from others.
Are you suggesting that this logline doesn’t satisfy a logline’s structure or that the components aren’t specific enough? OR to get these answers, I need to purchase something?
mop1011
See lessA spy with a big mouth must destroy an enemy radar station before more planes are shot down.
You each make excellent points, however Eathan correctly ?deduced that I should have used the adjective "brash" to describe my protagonist's overly confident, insubordinate attitude. I currently have almost thirty versions of the logline and still haven't nailed it. But I will. Thanks for the coveraRead more
You each make excellent points, however Eathan correctly ?deduced that I should have used the adjective “brash” to describe my protagonist’s overly confident, insubordinate attitude.
I currently have almost thirty versions of the logline and still haven’t nailed it. But I will.
Thanks for the coverage.
mop1011
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