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  1. Posted: February 28, 2019In: Crime

    After falling in debt to a crime family, a cocky mechanic is forced to strip stolen cars for an auto-garage, but when his love interest is killed in a hit-and-run caused by the family’s erratic nephew, he turns the family against itself to seek vengeance and escape the debt.

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    Added an answer on February 28, 2019 at 5:47 pm

    The most interesting part of this logline is the protagonist's plan to seek vengeance by turning the family against itself. I absolutely love that. Because of this, get rid of the debt subplot - it's unnecessary and not as interesting.

    The most interesting part of this logline is the protagonist’s plan to seek vengeance by turning the family against itself. I absolutely love that. Because of this, get rid of the debt subplot – it’s unnecessary and not as interesting.

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