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A young priest journeys with the devil and finds God.
No hook, premise & inciting incident..
No hook, premise & inciting incident..
See lessAn unsuccessful & frustrated young screenwriter search for ghosts to get inspired for writing horror screenplay as a final attempt
Thanks for your valuable feedback. Basically,? he is a screenwriter who writes high budget action screenplays and fed up with rejections of all his submissions from past 5 years. And his wife encourages him to give a one last final attempt with low budget screenplay like horror which she can affordRead more
Thanks for your valuable feedback.
Basically,? he is a screenwriter who writes high budget action screenplays and fed up with rejections of all his submissions from past 5 years. And his wife encourages him to give a one last final attempt with low budget screenplay like horror which she can afford $20k to produce the film.
So, in the story he just not stick to a haunted house but everywhere like GraveYard, Beach, Forest etc.
I tried to give specific details in logline but please let me know.
See lessWhen a young psychic girl becomes the victim of abuse she must use her ethereal powers to stop the horror and find a path to normality.
Your log-line seems better but instead of using "horror" you can use "abusement". And you should specify in your script how she got those powers.
Your log-line seems better but instead of using “horror” you can use “abusement”. And you should specify in your script how she got those powers.
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