1. Posted: September 8, 2016In:

    After being abandoned by his wife, a middle aged British man relocates to Bangkok and works as a teacher; this move gives him many hilarious experiences.

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    Thank you, for all your help. This is actually based on a true story and would be best as a TV series. There really isn?t any conflict or a protagonist, it?s about different English speaking nationalities (British, Americans, Canadians, Australians, Irish) becoming friends as teachers in Bangkok andRead more

    Thank you, for all your help.

    This is actually based on a true story and would be best as a TV series. There really isn?t any conflict or a protagonist, it?s about different English speaking nationalities (British, Americans, Canadians, Australians, Irish) becoming friends as teachers in Bangkok and the humorous (true) situations they get themselves into. What would be the best way to go about constructing a log line for a true story like that?

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  2. Posted: September 5, 2016In:

    After his divorce, a middle aged man needs a new lease of life. He achieves it by moving to a foreign country and changing his career.

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    Thank you for all your advice. ?This is the first logline ?I've ever written so I'll rewrite it and make it more specific. My initial concern about mentioning things like the country and previous career was going over the 25 word limit, which, from what I've read seems important.

    Thank you for all your advice. ?This is the first logline ?I’ve ever written so I’ll rewrite it and make it more specific. My initial concern about mentioning things like the country and previous career was going over the 25 word limit, which, from what I’ve read seems important.

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