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?An advanced alien race threatens to enslave Earth in the 1500?s and humanity?s last hope lies in the unproven inventions of an Italian Renaissance artist who holds a dark secret.?
I like the story concept. Perhaps good to redraft the logline from the protagonist's POV to make it clear who the protag is. Also useful to give an indication of what the protag's flaw/weakness is that creates the drama/conflict to living up to the responsibility to save humanity provoked by the incRead more
I like the story concept. Perhaps good to redraft the logline from the protagonist’s POV to make it clear who the protag is. Also useful to give an indication of what the protag’s flaw/weakness is that creates the drama/conflict to living up to the responsibility to save humanity provoked by the inciting incident. Good luck with it.
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