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  1. Posted: January 28, 2024In: Horror

    When a girl addicted to her phone learns that the phone also is addicted to her and won’t let her go, she must find a way to get rid of it before it destroys all aspects of her life. Be it personal, professional, financial, social, physical and spiritual. All aspects are affected.

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    Replied to answer on April 17, 2024 at 10:51 am

    Don't use "When" at the start? I'll try it too

    Don’t use “When” at the start? I’ll try it too

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  2. Posted: September 30, 2022In: Crime

    Un buscado black hack, se encontrará en una situación riesgosa al ponerse en riesgo su verdadera identidad y con ello su plan en peligro su plan contra el Estado.

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    Added an answer on October 2, 2022 at 12:23 pm

    . Hi, Milyy. Hope you’re great. Your logline sounds very interesting. But it's a little bit unclear. Let's break it down: 1.Who is the main character? This black hat hacker, who is the most wanted. 2.Where? Is it a goverment in crisis? is it the city of an existing or fictitious country? 3.When? I sRead more

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    Hi, Milyy. Hope you’re great.
    Your logline sounds very interesting. But it’s a little bit unclear. Let’s break it down:

    1.Who is the main character? This black hat hacker, who is the most wanted.

    2.Where? Is it a goverment in crisis? is it the city of an existing or fictitious country?

    3.When? I suppose you mean the contemporary era, although it can also be in a cyberpunk future.

    4.Why? (la razón o el llamado a la aventura) At first I thought the revealing of his identity was the reason but now I realized there’s no reason why. You can try by killing his son or lover or the good people of his country if he is the “good things that seem bad” kind of guy.

    5.Is there a more specific antagonist beside the state? Like a corrupt president, or the goverment’s best hacker. The Mc needs someone’s face to punch >:)

    6.What’s his goal? (¿Para qué?) Is his goal to clean his name or overthrow the state. I suppose it’s the last one.

    7.Stakes: (apuestas) What’s in game? His identity or the safety of his people, or maybe the security of another nation.

    With everything you have given me I can build the following example:

    “In a future dystopian city, when the corrupt government’s top hacker kills his lover, the most wanted black hat hacker must topple the government before his identity is revealed.”

    Although this is just an example, you can also draw your conclusions.

    Saludos desde México. 🙂

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  3. Posted: August 22, 2022In: SciFi

    A race car driver who comes out of retirement signs up for a televised deadly game show with another driver who hates him.

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    Added an answer on August 22, 2022 at 11:42 am

    That reminds me of Death Race 🤔. I would like to see that in a movie.

    That reminds me of Death Race 🤔. I would like to see that in a movie.

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