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A disgraced winemaker sets out to exact revenge on the farmer he thinks sold him poisoned grapes.
I did not see the inciting incident, meaning what triggered his revenge. I think parts of the first version could be used with this one to improve it.
I did not see the inciting incident, meaning what triggered his revenge. I think parts of the first version could be used with this one to improve it.
See lessAn assassin with a split personality is hired to protect a client who, unknowingly, his other personality has been hired to kill.
Very good logline. Congratulations!
Very good logline. Congratulations!
See lessWhen a video game character gains sentience, she’s horrified to see she spends her life dying and suffering at the hands of humans, and searches for other sentient characters to launch the rebellion against the players. — Title: Non Player-able Character
What happens to the MC to make her realise she is a character?
What happens to the MC to make her realise she is a character?
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