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After his wealthy wife dies, a reclusive and callous high school teacher wants to honour her dream of becoming a concert pianist.
After the death of his wealthy wife dies, a Reclusive and Callous High school teacher sets out to win a famous Concert Piano Competition I've added 'sets out' and changed 'become a concert pianist' to win a Famous Piano Competition' to make it a little more compelling Does this work better?
After the death of his wealthy wife dies, a Reclusive and Callous High school teacher sets out to win a famous Concert Piano Competition
I’ve added ‘sets out’ and changed ‘become a concert pianist’ to win a Famous Piano Competition’ to make it a little more compelling
Does this work better?
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