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  1. Posted: October 6, 2015In: Drama

    Four friends, who are all about to go through some life changing experiences. The Brotherhood is about to become The Fatherhood. And it isn’t going to be easy

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    Added an answer on October 12, 2015 at 6:08 am

    I've had a stab at a couple of revisions - would love to get your feedback... Charles?needs to rebuild his relationship with his son. Michael needs to stop Zoe?from having their baby, whilst Andrew?needs to get Rachael?pregnant. And Jason?has a secret that is going to shock everyone. The brotherhoodRead more

    I’ve had a stab at a couple of revisions – would love to get your feedback…

    Charles?needs to rebuild his relationship with his son. Michael needs to stop Zoe?from having their baby, whilst Andrew?needs to get Rachael?pregnant. And Jason?has a secret that is going to shock everyone. The brotherhood is about to become the Fatherhood. And its likely there will be some casualties along the way.

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    Four friends navigate the intricacies of their relationships as one struggles with fertility and another is about to become a father through a one night stand. The brotherhood is about to become the Fatherhood, but its likely there will be some casualties along the way.

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  2. Posted: October 6, 2015In: Drama

    Four friends, who are all about to go through some life changing experiences. The Brotherhood is about to become The Fatherhood. And it isn’t going to be easy

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    Added an answer on October 7, 2015 at 8:46 pm

    Thank you so much for your input - its been very helpful :) Now I'm off to revise!!!

    Thank you so much for your input – its been very helpful 🙂
    Now I’m off to revise!!!

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