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A decorated officer must apprehend his son, an escaped convict.
I agree with Mike and Gianni's above points. It sounds intriguing, but as it is, we don't know? what the inciting incident is, which is what Mike is saying in his comment above. What happens to the decorated officer to make him chase his convicted son? Is it to save him from self-destruction or beinRead more
I agree with Mike and Gianni’s above points. It sounds intriguing, but as it is, we don’t know? what the inciting incident is, which is what Mike is saying in his comment above. What happens to the decorated officer to make him chase his convicted son? Is it to save him from self-destruction or being killed by someone?
Looking forward to seeing this develop further! Good luck with it 🙂
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