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  1. Posted: February 21, 2019In: Action

    Broken hearted and riddled with terrifying nightmares, a once sassy Skylar Claymore struggles to get her mojo back. The loss of her husband, her home, her unborn baby and her job drives Skylar to become a drunken loose cannon. When she survives a home invasion and attempted rape, Skylar finds self-defense classes at a martial arts school to combat her fears and nightmares. When the Grandmaster unlocks a hidden talent, Skylar is drawn into an underground legion of martial artists. An excommunicated blood-thirsty member of the secret group threatens to destroy the heart of the legion. Skylar must learn to master her darkest fears to protect it.

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    Added an answer on February 22, 2019 at 6:10 pm

    Thank you for all of your feedback so far - very much appreciated. I'm still working on it - but here is my attempt at the short logline version: "When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked. Her powers are challenged by an enemy KungRead more

    Thank you for all of your feedback so far – very much appreciated. I’m still working on it – but here is my attempt at the short logline version:

    “When a broken hearted assault victim finds self-defence classes, a hidden talent for martial arts is unlocked. Her powers are challenged by an enemy Kung Fu clan who seek to destroy her and the school.”

    35 words is tough! Although now I think it sounds like just another clich?d martial arts film…. :/ what do you think?

    Cheers,
    Nina

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